“Girl falls off cruise ship and starts new island country.”
That’s the short version, I gave myself 10 words. Question: would you read this book? Why or why not?
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Fiction, and other made-up stories
“Girl falls off cruise ship and starts new island country.”
That’s the short version, I gave myself 10 words. Question: would you read this book? Why or why not?
Just 10 words and I’m sold. And not just because you are pitching it. We both know I’m not one to mince words.
It’s a unique concept, interesting and has a million possibilities.
I would read the shit out of this book, Trent.
Fay – thank you so much. That means craploads coming from you, because I know very well that you don’t just toss words out there.
I would because I’ll read anything you write. 😉
And you already read this one!
I would and not only because you wrote it but I am intrigued, now…
Thank you, Dale. Really appreciate it. I will offer more detail next week.
Woot!
Yes. Cause girls rule and I’d be curious where you would take it
Thank you Audra! I got a direction on this one, the book is finished, edited, everything.
Make her a red head and I’m in! 😉
(You know I would read it even if she was blond)
Ha! Thank you, Michelle!
I’m afraid I would not, based on just those ten words. Because the second five do not follow from the first, in my mind. I’d be more enticed if she had jumped off, or was thrown overboard. But that’s just me, and either way, when I see that Trent Lewin wrote it, I will definitely want to read it.
I hear you. I guess the question is why would she fall off and why would she start a new country. Ten words… not a lot to prepare an expression of intent. Maybe I’ll expose my query letter next week. Thanks as always, Walt! I’m glad you’re still around.
I’d read it to see what you did with that premise.
Thank you – will set up a longer synopsis for the weekend. It’s a bit of a crazy story.
So… Castaway Kingdom? Not sure which part I like better, the first half, or the second.
I like that title! This is a serious endeavour that makes me laugh.
the best kind!
Well, tyeah I would….oh, wait…..
(BTW, that is exactly how I pictured the cave…..)